The superintendent of Edgecombe County Schools has apologized to a SouthWest Edgecombe High School student who received his diploma two days late in apparent retaliation for delivering a commencement speech in his own words.
Marvin Wright, senior class president at SouthWest, was told he had to deliver a four-sentence speech prepared by school officials in lieu of a speech he had spent more than two weeks preparing for graduation ceremonies Friday.
In an act of defiance encouraged by other students, Wright decided at the virtual last second to deliver his own words.
As a result, Wright said, he was not permitted to collect his diploma on graduation day with other students.
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When the student realized his speech wasn’t available he remembered it was on his phone. When he used the phone they say he breached the “no electronic devices” rule.
So weak.
Here’s the speech. There is nothing wrong with it except for it being much longer than 4 sentences.:
Good evening to all who are gathered on today for the commencement of Southwest High School’s 2017 graduating class. My name is Marvin Wright and I am delighted to be standing here as your senior class president.
First and foremost, I want to thank God for making all of this possible. Secondly, I would like to thank all of the parents and family members for the unconditional love you have provided my classmates and I during our unpredictable phases of life, for ultimately sticking with us through thick and thin, and giving us constant guidance. I would like to also thank the faculty and staff of Southwest for instilling knowledge and preparing us for the next chapter that we will soon embark on. And lastly, but certainly not least, I wouldl like to personally thank my mother, Jokita Wright, for all of the sacrifices you have made for my 2 siblings and I. Selfless, strong, determined, humorous, provider, protector are only a few attributes that exhibit who you are, which motivates me day to day. So, Thank you Mom! For without you I would not be standing here today.
Now, class of 2017…. this it it! We have finally made it. There are no other people I’d rather have spent my high school years with than all of you. Most of the students in our graduating class have known each other since elementary school, which is an accumulation of 13 consecutive years.
When we take a walk down memory lane we can all visualize ourselves being young, naïve, tiny elementary school kids who relied on nap time throughout Kindergarten, who look forward to recess every day, and counted down the days and minutes until the biggest event of elementary school…field day.
Then we moved onto middle school where things didn’t work in our favor, such as me not hitting my intended growth spurt. Middle school was a transition period of having your own locker, having multiple teachers, dress codes were challenged in trying to figure out how to come up with your own “style” by also following the uniform guidelines, and athletics became an outlet for students who sought competition.
Finally, we made it to high school. There was more freedom, better lunch choices, and opportunities for us to explore, to figure out who we are.
It seems like yesterday we were timid freshmen excited to be part of the mature crowd, but unsure where we would fit in. For many of us, our first year in high school was a time where the temptation to look at your cell phone was unbearable and sometimes we caved in, which resulted in us getting our phones taken. Or how about when we attended our first Friday Night Lights football game in which we were able to stay out late and hang with our friends.
Sophomore year then quickly approached us where we knew the routine and thought we knew it all, but in reality we were still being overlooked because we were still considered under classmen.
Junior year, reality sunk in. We did all that we could to build up our resume by being committed to our academics, participating in varsity sports, and taking leadership positions in different clubs. We also took the necessary steps to prepare ourselves for the SAT and ACT, as well as faced the immense task of figuring out a timeline that will prepare us for after high school. I think it is safe to say that although junior year was the most stressful and challenging, it was the most rewarding.
Once the class of 2016 walked across the stage we were finally seniors! The year we had been dreaming of since freshmen year, was finally here. There was so many things to look forward to: seniority, senior prom, senior picnic, receiving our caps and gowns, and the list goes on. As seniors everything seemed different…teachers became mentors, friends became family, and Southwest High School became home. Little did we know that this year would come at a blink of an eye and the past four years would boil down to this day where all the hard work, laughs, tears, and long hours will have paid off.
Even though today is an accomplishment for the entire 2017 class and all of those who have helped us on this journey, it is going to take a lot of adjusting to get use to not seeing every single one of you on a daily basis. Even though I can’t predict the future I know that we all have the ability to make a difference in this world. For you should have the mindset that not only will you graduate today, but everyday is a graduation. This ultimately means that graduation is a continuous process in which you should strive to true lifelong learning of continuous, self-motivated pursuit of knowledge for personal improvement.
I am no expert in this journey we call life but we all have the ability to make a difference and to be that change the world needs. The past 13 years have equipped us for a time as this to stand bold in who we are. So I say to my classmates, cherish these last few minutes we spend here and the memories we have created and get ready for the journey ahead.
Thank you guys for making my senior year better than I could ever imagine and for all the moments I will always hold dear to my heart. Thank you, and congratulations to the class of 2017!!!
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Maybe they had a problem with him thanking God?
There must be something more to this that the reporters are failing to report.
The Wilson Times reports –
On Monday, Wright signed commitment papers to enter the U.S. Navy and will report for duty on Oct. 10.
He plans on being a hospital corpsman.
It’s all pretty simple….he pronounced corpsman wrong….off with his head!!!!…
The is hope. If we keep God involved.
There is hope. Ijust solved the”covfefe” problem.
Good jb Marvin.
Screw ’em. He will make the Navy proud one day. That kid is a ray of hope for our future in my opinion. Believe it or not, there are more of his type than one may think. Believe me on this.
WOW! Redemption of the next generation, in my mind. Very well done, including defying the dictatorship of school leaders.
That’s speech is something the staff should have been proud of, because their 13 years of educating Mr.Wright, was within his words.
But then again, his speech may illustrate the ability to rise above the handicapping of educators.
Fantastic job, to both Mr.Wright and his mother.
His name is “Wright”. That’s the implication.
I thought his speech was fine. No doubt better than the 4 sentences they had prepared for him. School administrators are a bunch of self important blow hards. And 99% libs!
Great job kid! Corpsman school is not an easy path, but it’s
a good one. Sounds like he had great parents and actually used
the school to learn. That’s becoming rare nowadays.
I applaud the young man for doing this and found his prepared remarks a fitting coda for one graduating from High School.
Skipped my graduation to go on my scuba certification dive out of state. I look funny in a gown anyway.
I guess they want that final knuckle under that those four sentences would have signified – that he had learned to drink the Kool-aid and would toe their prepared scenario for graduation – the NEA idea that kids don’t graduate school but that teachers graduate them.
You just can’t express any proof you learned anything beyond what they “taught” you.
Sausage garage. Heh heh.
sausage garage?
It don’t get much better
Remember tummy sticks
This young man exercised his freedom of speech.
He learned what was important, regardless of the snowflakes in the teacher’s lounge or the leftist administrators.
I have such little faith in humanity that I look both ways before crossing a one way street.
When I see something like this I realize there may still be hope for mankind after all.